Saturday, November 24, 2007

COMPARATIVE paragraph 3

It is verify the children live better when they live in a paceful home;incontrast, to children who suffer violence. There are many reasons because the life is very different in both cases for example: Children with paceful lives they have ability to talk with other people; and they can get better grades and they can smile and get fun moments with other children; ontheotherhand, children who suffer violence it is difficult for them to sahre with other;thus, they can not get good grades other aspect is that they usually cry and look very sad, Finally when one person suffers violence their life differs in many aspects because all humans need to livee in pace, love and harmony.

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